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Post by Hannah on Aug 11, 2011 10:30:03 GMT -5
Chapter 15: "He had a sex-pack (geddit cuz hes so sexah) and a really huge you-know-what and everything."
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Post by GlacierSong on Aug 11, 2011 10:32:26 GMT -5
Anyone notice how she misspells her character's name so much? Enoby, Egogy, Enby, etc. Yes. Yes. It made me go "ADFDSGGSDSDSDF" because I have a horrid case of grammar OCD. Not officially diagnosed, but it's true. xDD Chapter 15: "He had a sex-pack (geddit cuz hes so sexah) and a really huge you-know-what and everything." WHAT THE SSDFAHGSDFSD??!!!! 0_0
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Post by (´・ω・`) on Aug 11, 2011 10:32:28 GMT -5
The spelling gets worse as you keep reading. Apparently, "Raven" stops helping after a while.
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Post by Hannah on Aug 11, 2011 10:34:24 GMT -5
The spelling gets worse as you keep reading. Apparently, "Raven" stops helping after a while. "u no wut! sut up ok! proov 2 me ur nut prepz! raven u suk u fuken bich gimme bak mah fukijn swteet ur supsd 2 rit dis! Raven wtf u bich ur suposd to dodis! BTW fangz 2 britney5655 4 techin muh japnese!"
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Post by (´・ω・`) on Aug 11, 2011 10:38:34 GMT -5
Ahaha and when she starts speaking "Japanese", lol. Tara becoming a weeaboo was all this story needed.
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Post by Hannah on Aug 11, 2011 10:39:58 GMT -5
"We ran in happly. MCR were there playing 'Helena'. I was so fucking happy! Gerard looked even sexier than he did in da pictures." this girl is totally going to stalk gerard way someday
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Post by (´・ω・`) on Aug 11, 2011 10:42:45 GMT -5
>implying she doesn't already stalk Gerard Way
Also, she can't write smut to save her life.
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Post by Hannah on Aug 11, 2011 10:46:26 GMT -5
"fuk u ok! u fokng suk. itz nut ma fult if itz speld rong" I'm losing brain cells while reading this. >_>;
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Post by (´・ω・`) on Aug 11, 2011 10:48:53 GMT -5
I absolutely love how everyone is fucking OOC. Apparently, everyone moved houses to Slytherin and became a Satanist.
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Post by Hannah on Aug 11, 2011 10:53:39 GMT -5
First chapter: "Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Justin ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!"
Last chapter: "well I hav noffing 2 say but evrt1 stup glamming ok!111 if any gofik ppl r reading dis den u rok!11 omg I stil kant wait 4 da movie!1 tom fleton is so hot lol i hop harry wil bekum gofik koz mi frend told me he iz rlly emo in dis book!1111 omfg im leeving dubya pretty soon kant wait! Diz wil prolly be da last chaptah until I kum bak."
Her spelling does get much worse. I guess she gets lazy ...?
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Post by (´・ω・`) on Aug 11, 2011 10:56:17 GMT -5
Guise this is the most awesome and goffik story on the internet. Anyone who doesn't like it is a prep.
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Post by Hannah on Aug 11, 2011 10:58:18 GMT -5
I love how in the beginning, she says 'IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!' and then in the next chapter, she says, ' BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok!'
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Post by (´・ω・`) on Aug 11, 2011 11:01:03 GMT -5
Found another gem m.fanfiction.net/s/7233611/2/ It's a Warriors fanfic. FYI Warriors is a series about wild cats divided in clans and they fight and are awesome, etc. Google for more info. "OMG U CN TALK?/?" sed Skieroc haply. "ya" sed commitket "ok" sed Skieroc
"its nuthn" sed beuatfelpaw
"ya it is" sed skieroc
"na" sed bneautfelpaw
"ya" sed skieroc
"no not erly" sed beuatefalpaw
"ya tel me"This is true literature.
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Post by Hannah on Aug 11, 2011 11:02:36 GMT -5
Found another gem m.fanfiction.net/s/7233611/2/ It's a Warriors fanfic. FYI Warriors is a series about wild cats divided in clans and they fight and are awesome, etc. Google for more info. "OMG U CN TALK?/?" sed Skieroc haply. "ya" sed commitket "ok" sed Skieroc
"its nuthn" sed beuatfelpaw
"ya it is" sed skieroc
"na" sed bneautfelpaw
"ya" sed skieroc
"no not erly" sed beuatefalpaw
"ya tel me"This is true literature. Oh my god. This is just wrong. ; I found this amusing: fuckyeahbadfanfics.tumblr.com/
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Post by GlacierSong on Aug 11, 2011 11:05:54 GMT -5
Found another gem m.fanfiction.net/s/7233611/2/ It's a Warriors fanfic. FYI Warriors is a series about wild cats divided in clans and they fight and are awesome, etc. Google for more info. "OMG U CN TALK?/?" sed Skieroc haply. "ya" sed commitket "ok" sed Skieroc
"its nuthn" sed beuatfelpaw
"ya it is" sed skieroc
"na" sed bneautfelpaw
"ya" sed skieroc
"no not erly" sed beuatefalpaw
"ya tel me"This is true literature. WHY WOULD THEY DO THAT TO THAT SERIES?!! WHY?!?! Sorry, I'm just a big Warriors fan and my OCD is on overdrive. Dx This grammar is unforgiveable in all of these. It has forced me to go write something since I need some good grammar. 0_0
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